Tuesday

It’s six o’clock at Monadock
And they say all is well
We lead our life
In little hives
Towards a private hell

Sit there, talking to the ocean
Gazing wide-eyed at the sky
Angels dance on silver pinhead
Thoughts and reason gone awry

Shell-shocked hair; and eyes grow weary
Stubble itches, teeth decay
Face grows haggard. Told you, dearie
That’s the price you’ve got to pay

Think you’re smart, and so talented
Delusion seems to have a way
Of leading smiling sheep to slaughter
And that again is the price you pay

Creepy little good-for-nothing
So much ego, so much pride
I notice that you’re always smiling
Hiding scars so deep inside

What do you call a worthless someone
Who it does seem has no goal
Than weep and wail, than convulse with laughter
End up scarring his own soul?

I hope you have a nice day, reader
Go dream about the flowers and trees
And oceans, clouds and golden sunlight

Bleak, dark human miseries.

17 comments:

Até said...

I want pretty word!!!

Anonymous said...

Why so pessimistic?
Scrap the first line if you can..I don't like it.

Anonymous said...

Rustle, autumn.

Até said...

Pretty words!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!

Anonymous said...

I'll send you more when I remember.

the psycho guy said...

Appopriate, approximate,apoplectic, prior, falacious

Até said...

They aren't pretty, Psycho --

the psycho guy said...

They are. *hmph*

Até said...

Aww..

Hmm...




















No, they aren't.

TheLadyLazarus said...

Brilliant.

Congratulations.

saptarshi said...

I love the poem as a piece of literature.

But it's kind of stifling.I was almost left gasping for hope...couldn't find the faintest ray of it anywhere.

It IS very well written.But I guess I will never live to relate to such pessimism.One pinch of Hope-that is all i would ask for.

saptarshi said...

And a very Happy Birthday.Couldn't wish you earlier since your page simply would NOT open!

the psycho guy said...

Well, thank you Saptarshi (for the birthday wishes as well). As for hope, um... that won't exist as long as I'm around. But anyway, we all hope (including me). But sometimes for the wierdest and most unreasonable things.

Lady lazarus: thanks.

Até said...

...

:p

hehe

TheLadyLazarus said...

anytime

Dum Spiro, Spero. said...

just wondering...any of this related to The Fountainhead...or were Monad'n'ock and 'So much ego, so much pride' just coincidences hmmm?

the psycho guy said...

No, Spiro, it isn't. That was a co-incdence. But perhas it is influenced by Ayn Rand. I love what she writes.