It’s six o’clock at Monadock
And they say all is well
We lead our life
In little hives
Towards a private hell
Sit there, talking to the ocean
Gazing wide-eyed at the sky
Angels dance on silver pinhead
Thoughts and reason gone awry
Shell-shocked hair; and eyes grow weary
Stubble itches, teeth decay
Face grows haggard. Told you, dearie
That’s the price you’ve got to pay
Think you’re smart, and so talented
Delusion seems to have a way
Of leading smiling sheep to slaughter
And that again is the price you pay
Creepy little good-for-nothing
So much ego, so much pride
I notice that you’re always smiling
Hiding scars so deep inside
What do you call a worthless someone
Who it does seem has no goal
Than weep and wail, than convulse with laughter
End up scarring his own soul?
I hope you have a nice day, reader
Go dream about the flowers and trees
And oceans, clouds and golden sunlight
Bleak, dark human miseries.
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17 comments:
I want pretty word!!!
Why so pessimistic?
Scrap the first line if you can..I don't like it.
Rustle, autumn.
Pretty words!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
I'll send you more when I remember.
Appopriate, approximate,apoplectic, prior, falacious
They aren't pretty, Psycho --
They are. *hmph*
Aww..
Hmm...
No, they aren't.
Brilliant.
Congratulations.
I love the poem as a piece of literature.
But it's kind of stifling.I was almost left gasping for hope...couldn't find the faintest ray of it anywhere.
It IS very well written.But I guess I will never live to relate to such pessimism.One pinch of Hope-that is all i would ask for.
And a very Happy Birthday.Couldn't wish you earlier since your page simply would NOT open!
Well, thank you Saptarshi (for the birthday wishes as well). As for hope, um... that won't exist as long as I'm around. But anyway, we all hope (including me). But sometimes for the wierdest and most unreasonable things.
Lady lazarus: thanks.
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:p
hehe
anytime
just wondering...any of this related to The Fountainhead...or were Monad'n'ock and 'So much ego, so much pride' just coincidences hmmm?
No, Spiro, it isn't. That was a co-incdence. But perhas it is influenced by Ayn Rand. I love what she writes.
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