Monday

Time stopped; frozen. As if trapped in amber: immobile; like a little insect.

She looked at me, and smiled.



Then, the music began to play. It was some orchestra, playing some classical piece, by some great composer or the other. The music was very faint and coy; as if not to invade my privacy. Reduced to barely a whisper, it died out.

She looked at me, and smiled.



I could see the play of light on the wooden walls. Glimmering; shimmering; while the fireplace roared. The pale, silver moonlight tricked in, and merged with the golden glow. A portrait of an admiral on the wall; looking regal and haughty - expecting me to admire him. I paid no attention.

She looked at me, and smiled.




Our hostess introduced her to me. A friend, she said, a very close friend. Our hostess’s voice, usually so nasal and annoying, didn’t seem to bother me.


She looked at me, and smiled.



I looked at her, smiled, and left the room. I was too afraid to say hello.

7 comments:

Até said...

Really liked this one. Love the descriptions. hmm --




O - and - Psycho? Err ... it's Piglet. NOT pig. Hmm? Please, make the change.




(Of course, I totally appreciate you taking the trouble to link me at all. Thank you!)

Lúthien Táralóm said...

Great, I'm going to put my version of this up on my site.

saptarshi said...

this one was Great!
loved the poem u wrote on my blog comment...would u mind elucidating the last line though?

the psycho guy said...

Oink: You're welcome.

Princess: Ofcourse (But remember to mention me. Don't take ALL the credit. Just kidding. Infact, don't mention me at all)

Saptarshi: I write tripe all the time, don't event attempt to figure it out.

The Doors Of Perception said...

'..and we said our goodbyes before we said hellos..'


if you get a chance go through this

http://www.freeweb.hu/tchl/salinger/heartof.html

saptarshi said...

@ the PSYCHO guy: Loved it nevertheless.

the psycho guy said...

Thank you, "doors of perception". T'was very entertaining, that story.